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Wednesday, 1 April 2015

My time at the swiming pool

Jacob’s time at the School Swimming Pool

Learning intention
I am learning to write a hook an exciting beginning that captures audience interest levels.

Caboom, as I splashed in the pool. The pool was so cold. I had to keep on moving to get warm. First I was doing streamline, then I was floating. When I finished I went out and changed in the boys tent. Then I went back to class.

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