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Friday 30 October 2015

Recount



Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
Wow! as we went to Rainbows End . It was amazing when we got there with my Aunty, Uncle and my brothers.


Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives
Our first ride was the pirate ship that goes up and down. My tummy felt weird when the pirate ship went up and down . Then we went off the pirate ship and went to the log flume ride . There were heaps
of people in line.We had to wait for a long time until it was our turn .The log boat ride took us to dark caves  . Inside the caves were gold guarded by little
Armour monsters .Then we saw the dancing flowers. The dancing flowers were going side to side like a tiger swishing its tail . Then we went out of the cave and then we came to a steep ramp . We
went down very very fast . Splash! . Me and my brother and my Uncle got all soaking wet . Then we got off the log boat ride and my aunty took a picture
off us next to a poster . Then I went to the ufo all by
my self . It was a bit high but I gave it a go .
When I got on the seat it started . It went up and down .It was like A rollercoaster . When it stopped
I got off . And that was our last ride .
Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.




Me and brothers and my Aunty and Uncle
had  fun . Then it was time to go home. All of us had
a fun day .

xtramaths

this is my result on Xtramaths.
I got  twenty smiley faces and  three mistakes

Wednesday 28 October 2015

What is a pulley



This is my poster about pulleys. I learnt that pulleys can lift heavy objects .
A pulley is a simple Machine.

Monday 19 October 2015

xtramaths

                                            This is my screenshot on Xtramaths . I got 3 mistakes and 30 smiley faces .
                                                 

Tuesday 13 October 2015

still life reflection

Art Still Life Reflection

  1. What are you most pleased with? Why / why not?
I am pleased with my blending because the colours blend in with my fruit and it makes it look real


2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting?
I learn how to blend the colours together to make it look real.
I learnt that fruit are more than one colour


3. What did you find easy?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I found drawing the shapes of the fruit easy


4. What did you find difficult?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
Blending the colours together




5. Who did helped you with your still life painting?
Miss Paton



6. What would you change? why / why not?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines

I would change nothing because my fruit looks perfect

  
7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time?  I would try and blend my colours together so it can blend in with my background


this is my still life reflection