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Friday, 31 July 2015
Whats in my lunch box
That this term we have been learning about healthy eating . this pie chart shows the food that were in my lunch box on wednesday July 22 I had 1chip 1 yoghurt 2 sandwiches
Thursday, 30 July 2015
Revising sentences
Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of
this word means something in writing . Today we have focusing on the D.D stand for delete.
In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete , take out words and
change sentences . Here is my piece of my writing Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
this word means something in writing . Today we have focusing on the D.D stand for delete.
In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete , take out words and
change sentences . Here is my piece of my writing Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
My copy
Miss Paton has cat is named Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be pain. He likes to sniff rubbish .Sometimes oscar comes to my house starving for food . Oscar likes to sleep on my chair. He does not like my laptop . He would sit on my lap. Oscar likes getting the attention .
54 words
Wednesday, 29 July 2015
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