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Thursday, 12 November 2015

my comment to room 4






                                  This is my Comment on Room 4 's Movie called the flying fives. I like the fly fives movie because I like there costumes and the music.

Tuesday, 10 November 2015

Chopsticks challenge


The graph shows the numbers of centimetres from where the chopsticks dropped the sweets . Joseph and tanni's sweets was the closes to the bowl . Skys sweet was the farest from the bowl . All of us did'nt drop any . The pebbles were thin in the middle . The winegums were thick the outside .

Monday, 9 November 2015

Xtramaths

                                             
                                          This is my results on xtramaths . I got 2 mistakes and 12 smiley faces

Rock breakers



This is my poster on rock breakers .

Friday, 6 November 2015

Friday, 30 October 2015

Recount



Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
Wow! as we went to Rainbows End . It was amazing when we got there with my Aunty, Uncle and my brothers.


Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives
Our first ride was the pirate ship that goes up and down. My tummy felt weird when the pirate ship went up and down . Then we went off the pirate ship and went to the log flume ride . There were heaps
of people in line.We had to wait for a long time until it was our turn .The log boat ride took us to dark caves  . Inside the caves were gold guarded by little
Armour monsters .Then we saw the dancing flowers. The dancing flowers were going side to side like a tiger swishing its tail . Then we went out of the cave and then we came to a steep ramp . We
went down very very fast . Splash! . Me and my brother and my Uncle got all soaking wet . Then we got off the log boat ride and my aunty took a picture
off us next to a poster . Then I went to the ufo all by
my self . It was a bit high but I gave it a go .
When I got on the seat it started . It went up and down .It was like A rollercoaster . When it stopped
I got off . And that was our last ride .
Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.




Me and brothers and my Aunty and Uncle
had  fun . Then it was time to go home. All of us had
a fun day .

xtramaths

this is my result on Xtramaths.
I got  twenty smiley faces and  three mistakes