Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
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Wow! as we went to Rainbows End . It was amazing when we got there with my Aunty, Uncle and my brothers.
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Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How
Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs
Write in the past tense
Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings
Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia
Use connectives
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Our first ride was the pirate ship that goes up and down. My tummy felt weird when the pirate ship went up and down . Then we went off the pirate ship and went to the log flume ride . There were heaps
of people in line.We had to wait for a long time until it was our turn .The log boat ride took us to dark caves . Inside the caves were gold guarded by little
Armour monsters .Then we saw the dancing flowers. The dancing flowers were going side to side like a tiger swishing its tail . Then we went out of the cave and then we came to a steep ramp . We
went down very very fast . Splash! . Me and my brother and my Uncle got all soaking wet . Then we got off the log boat ride and my aunty took a picture
off us next to a poster . Then I went to the ufo all by
my self . It was a bit high but I gave it a go .
When I got on the seat it started . It went up and down .It was like A rollercoaster . When it stopped
I got off . And that was our last ride .
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Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.
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Me and brothers and my Aunty and Uncle
had fun . Then it was time to go home. All of us had
a fun day .
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I am Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1. My teachers are Miss Paton and Mr Wong.
Friday, 30 October 2015
Recount
Labels:
writing
Wednesday, 28 October 2015
What is a pulley
This is my poster about pulleys. I learnt that pulleys can lift heavy objects .
A pulley is a simple Machine.
Labels:
inquiry
Monday, 19 October 2015
Tuesday, 13 October 2015
still life reflection
Art Still Life Reflection
- What are you most pleased with? Why / why not?
I am pleased with my blending because the colours blend in with my fruit and it makes it look real
2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting?
I learn how to blend the colours together to make it look real.
I learnt that fruit are more than one colour
3. What did you find easy?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I found drawing the shapes of the fruit easy
4. What did you find difficult?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
Blending the colours together
5. Who did helped you with your still life painting?
Miss Paton
6. What would you change? why / why not?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I would change nothing because my fruit looks perfect
7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time? I would try and blend my colours together so it can blend in with my background
this is my still life reflection
Friday, 25 September 2015
Tuesday, 15 September 2015
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