Recount

Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels	Wow! as we went to Rainbows End . It was amazing when we got there with my Aunty, Uncle and my brothers.
Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs Write in the past tense Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia Use connectives	Our first ride was the pirate ship that goes up and down. My tummy felt weird when the pirate ship went up and down . Then we went off the pirate ship and went to the log flume ride . There were heaps of people in line.We had to wait for a long time until it was our turn .The log boat ride took us to dark caves  . Inside the caves were gold guarded by little Armour monsters .Then we saw the dancing flowers. The dancing flowers were going side to side like a tiger swishing its tail . Then we went out of the cave and then we came to a steep ramp . We went down very very fast . Splash! . Me and my brother and my Uncle got all soaking wet . Then we got off the log boat ride and my aunty took a picture off us next to a poster . Then I went to the ufo all by my self . It was a bit high but I gave it a go . When I got on the seat it started . It went up and down .It was like A rollercoaster . When it stopped I got off . And that was our last ride .
Conclusion Sums up how you felt about the experience.	Me and brothers and my Aunty and Uncle had  fun . Then it was time to go home. All of us had a fun day .