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I am Year 5 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1. My teachers are Miss Paton and Mr Wong.
Friday, 31 July 2015
Whats in my lunch box
That this term we have been learning about healthy eating . this pie chart shows the food that were in my lunch box on wednesday July 22 I had 1chip 1 yoghurt 2 sandwiches
Thursday, 30 July 2015
Revising sentences
Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of
this word means something in writing . Today we have focusing on the D.D stand for delete.
In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete , take out words and
change sentences . Here is my piece of my writing Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
this word means something in writing . Today we have focusing on the D.D stand for delete.
In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete , take out words and
change sentences . Here is my piece of my writing Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.
My copy
Miss Paton has cat is named Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be pain. He likes to sniff rubbish .Sometimes oscar comes to my house starving for food . Oscar likes to sleep on my chair. He does not like my laptop . He would sit on my lap. Oscar likes getting the attention .
54 words
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writing
Wednesday, 29 July 2015
Tuesday, 28 July 2015
Friday, 24 July 2015
Thursday, 23 July 2015
Whats in my lunch box?
This is my work about whats in my lunch box
What’s in my lunch box?
What’s in my lunch box?
Is your lunch a healthy lunch? Why / Why Not?
What was the healthiest?
What was the least healthy and why?
What is missing from your lunch box?
The chips are not healthy because they have oil and are salty. They are not good for your teeth. Yoghurt is good for your teeth and bones. Inside my Sandwiches are ham and in the other sandwich there is nutella. Nutella is not healthy because it has sugar. The food that is missing from my lunch box are meat, fruit and vegetables.
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writing
Whats in my lunch box
the chips are not healthy because they have oil and salt. Yoghurt is good for your teeth and bones .And the sandwiches
are healthy to
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writing
What's in my lunch box?
the chips are not healthy because they have salt and oil. And I have more sandwiches than chips and yoghurt . Yoghurt is healthy and it is good for your teeth and bones
Friday, 3 July 2015
Reflection
Jacob
Term 2 Friday 3 July
In dance we did the hand dance . Some of the hand dance
moves were twirl and twist . Then Mrs Eeles laid the kowhaiwhai pattern
cards on the
ground and we had to use our body to create that pattern and move to another one
when you are finished with our first one . Then we picked a partner
and your partner had to follow your other partner's hand that was called magnetic hands. Then we had to pick a brother and pick 4 moves for our brother
and pick a partner and share our moves then Mrs Eeles got the camera and video
us . some only done two moves the moves that we did were twisted curved stretched and angular.
this is my dance Reflection
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writing
Thursday, 2 July 2015
How to make Anzac Biscuits
this is my poster about how to make Anzac Biscuits. We have the ingredients and he step
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writing
Wednesday, 1 July 2015
Making Anzac Biscuits
this is my Making Anzac Biscuits work. We had to double and half the ingredients
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